It snowed !!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your photo with me. That\'s wonderful! It must be very cold there now. Stay warm today. Drink hot coffee and enjoy the cold weather. ^^ I am excited to talk to you again on our next class.^^
With love,
Teacher Dane =)
Hi [이름], I am glad that you took a photo of the snow in your place. How thick it is? I think you need to visit your closet and start putting on layers of clothes to keep you warm. The winter season is fast approaching you need to keep safe and prepare for winter activities that you\'ll enjoy. Have fun while you think of Mr. [Name] or Olaf.
See you again.
Sincerely,
Teacher Cathy
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