it sounds good.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
How are you MISS LISA?
I am excited to talk with you.
See you later!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
I have a lot of talk about.
>>> I have a lot to talk about.
Yellow fever shot only need once all my life.
>>> A single dose of yellow fever vaccine can provide me lifelong protection.
So , i got an shot early with my friends.
>>> So, I got a shot early with my friends.
i was shopping after gota shot..
>>> I shopped after I got the shot.
Why can\'t i listen quickly?
>>> Anyway, why can\'t I listen quickly?
i\'m upset.ㅠㅠI T think slowly and will answer..
>>> I\'m upset. I think and answer slowly.
i\'m so nice to hear that you will come to korea.
>>> Well, I\'m so glad to hear that you will come to Korea.
You can contact me.
>>> Correct!
Please.[휴대전화]..[이름]
>>> Here is my number, [휴대전화].
i can take care of you.
>>> I can take care of you.
My daughter keep in touch her friend of phillphine .
>>> My daughter keeps in touch with her friend in the Philippines.
People of philliphine is very good.
>>> Filipinos are very good.
oh, Tomorrow , i\'m going to go to the tradition market in seoul. Because My mother want me to go there.so i have to go there.
>>> Oh! Tomorrow, I\'m going to the traditional market in Seoul because my mother wants me to go there.
My mother is eighty years old.
>>> Correct!
Maybe we should free talk again.
>>> Correct!
I\'m so happy to think of travelling to south America these days.
>>> I\'m so excited about my trip to South America.
had
>>> Correct!
saw,
>>> Correct!
lay,
>>> lying
called,
>>> Correct!
took,
>>> was taken
was,
>>> is
had,
>>> has
expected,
>>> expects
told ,
>>> Correct!
speeded,
>>> wasn\'t speeding
thought,
>>> Correct!
caused.
>>> was caused
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