it sounds good.

2018-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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I have a lot of talk about. Yellow fever shot only need once all my life. So , i got an shot early with my friends. i was shopping after gota shot.. Why can't i listen quickly? i'm upset.ㅠㅠI T think slowly and will answer.. i'm so nice to hear that you will come to korea. You can contact me.Please.[휴대전화]..[이름] i can take care of you. My daughter keep in touch her friend of phillphine .People of philliphine is very good. oh, Tomorrow , i'm going to go to the tradition market in seoul. Because My mother want me to go there.so i have to go there.My mother is eighty years old. Maybe we should free talk again.I'm so happy to think of travelling to south America these days. had,saw, lay, called,took, was, had, expected, told ,speeded, thought, caused.

강사 첨삭

How are you MISS LISA?

I am excited to talk with you.

See you later!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


I have a lot of talk about. 

>>> I have a lot to talk about.                                 

Yellow fever shot only need once all my life. 

>>> A single dose of yellow fever vaccine can provide me lifelong protection.

So , i got an shot early with my friends. 

>>> So, I got a shot early with my friends.                              

i was shopping after gota shot.. 

>>> I shopped after I got the shot.                               

Why can\'t i listen quickly?

>>> Anyway, why can\'t I listen quickly?

i\'m upset.ㅠㅠI T think slowly and will answer.. 

>>> I\'m upset. I think and answer slowly.    

i\'m so nice to hear that you will come to korea. 

>>> Well, I\'m so glad to hear that you will come to Korea.                 

You can contact me.

>>> Correct!    

Please.[휴대전화]..[이름] 

>>> Here is my number, [휴대전화].                 

i can take care of you.

>>> I can take care of you.

My daughter keep in touch her friend of phillphine .

>>> My daughter keeps in touch with her friend in the Philippines.

People of philliphine is very good. 

>>> Filipinos are very good.

oh, Tomorrow , i\'m going to go to the tradition market in seoul. Because My mother want me to go there.so i have to go there.

>>> Oh! Tomorrow, I\'m going to the traditional market in Seoul because my mother wants me to go there.

My mother is eighty years old.

>>> Correct!    

Maybe we should free talk again.

>>> Correct!    

I\'m so happy to think of travelling to south America these days. 

>>> I\'m so excited about my trip to South America.

 

had

>>> Correct!    

saw,

>>> Correct!    

lay,

>>> lying 

called,

>>> Correct!    

took,

>>> was taken  

was,

>>> is

had,

>>> has 

expected,

>>> expects

told ,

>>> Correct!    

speeded,

>>> wasn\'t speeding

thought,

>>> Correct!    

caused.

>>> was caused

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