It was a busy and sad day!

2013-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Today my mom had an important appointment. So I had to stay at home alone. I did my homework at home. But it was very hard to do,so I didn't do my homework well. After doing my homework,I had lunch. And I prepare something like pencil and eraser for my important appointment like my mom at 2. When I came back home,I was really tired so I read some books. At 9,my mom was angry because I didn't do my homework well. My mom yelled, "Why didn't you do your homework!" I know I didn't do well, but I was sad.

강사 첨삭

I\'m sorry that you felt sad, I hope you are not feeling that way anymore. Maybe you should be more careful and do your homework better next time, right? This way, your mom won\'t get mad at you and you won\'t feel bad either. Cheer up! Have a happy weekend! -----T. Jane-------   Today my mom had an important appointment. >>>CORRECT >>>OR My mom had an important appointment today.So I had to stay at home alone. >>>CORRECTI did my homework at home. >>>CORRECTBut it was very hard to do,so I didn\'t do my homework well. >>>CORRECTAfter doing my homework,I had lunch. >>>CORRECT >>>OR I had lunch after doing my homework.And I prepare something like pencil and eraser for my important appointmentlike my mom at 2. >>>I prepared things like my pencil and eraser for my important appointment just like what my mom did.When I came back home,I was really tired so I read some books. >>>CORRECTAt 9,my mom was angry because I didn\'t do my homework well. >>>CORRECTMy mom yelled, \"Why didn\'t you do your homework!\" >>>CORRECTI know I didn\'t do well, but I was sad. >>>I know I didn\'t do it well so I was sad.

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