It was a day to wear me out
학생이 쓴 원문
Whew... It was really tough day.
Because I slpet late at night, so my condition was bad.
In this condition, I should have to play a basketball.
I'm tired out again.
And you know? I think you are a good teacher. You always smile and give me an advice. These make my skill improved.
Instead, Only what I feel sorry is that I can't make our talking more naturally.
I hope I can express my opinion in English fluently as soon as possible.
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Firsrt, it's a Franch speaking skill. I'm learing French in a universitiy. But it is too hard for me though it's a basic process. Secound is a engineering skill. Because I want to fix my car if I have.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]^^
Cheer up! It\'s Friday.^^
Be thankful for tough starts because in the end if you get the hang of it, the tough part would be easier and make you stronger.
There is always a challenge in learning so the best way is to adjust yourself because Education would not adjust to you.
Keep a positive mind always.
Today you had errors mostly on spelling and verb. Use one main verb for your sentences.
Practice and you will improve.
PS.
I\'m a good teacher to good students.
If you think I\'m good that means you are good. I don\'t mind errors. I aim for self-expression
and the corrections come later to push for improvement.
Take care wise guy^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Whew... It was really tough day.
>> CORRECT
OR> I had a rough day.Because I slpet late at night, so my condition was bad.
>> I slept late last night so my condition is bad.
In this condition, I should have to play a basketball.
>> In this condition, I should play basketball. [choose only one verb phrase-\"have to\" or \"should play\"]I\'m tired out again.>> CORRECT
OR> I\'m not energetic.now? I think you are a good teacher.
>> I now think that you are a good teacher.
You always smile and give me an advice.
>> CORRECT
OR> You always encourage me.
These make my skill improved.
>> This improves my skill.Instead, Only what I feel sorry is that I can\'t make our talking more naturally.>>I only feel sorry that I can\'t converse more naturally.I hope I can express my opinion in English fluently as soon as possible.
>> CORRECT
>> I hope I can fluently express myself right away.
Firsrt, it\'s a Franch speaking skill. I\'m learing French in a universitiy.
>> First it\'s French speaking skill. I\'m studying french in a University.
But it is too hard for me though it\'s a basic process.
>> I find it difficult but then it\'s a basic process.
Secound is a engineering skill. Because I want to fix my car if I have.
>> Second is an Engineering skill because I want to fix my car if I own one.
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