It was a day to wear me out

2014-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Whew... It was really tough day. Because I slpet late at night, so my condition was bad. In this condition, I should have to play a basketball. I'm tired out again. And you know? I think you are a good teacher. You always smile and give me an advice. These make my skill improved. Instead, Only what I feel sorry is that I can't make our talking more naturally. I hope I can express my opinion in English fluently as soon as possible. <Essay> Firsrt, it's a Franch speaking skill. I'm learing French in a universitiy. But it is too hard for me though it's a basic process. Secound is a engineering skill. Because I want to fix my car if I have.

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Hi there [이름]^^   Cheer up! It\'s Friday.^^ Be thankful for tough starts because in the end if you get the hang of it, the tough part would be easier and make you stronger. There is always a challenge in learning so the best way is to adjust yourself because Education would not adjust to you. Keep a positive mind always.   Today you had errors mostly on spelling and verb. Use one main verb for your sentences. Practice and you will improve.   PS. I\'m a good teacher to good students. If you think I\'m good that means you are good. I don\'t mind errors. I aim for self-expression and the corrections come later to push for improvement.   Take care wise guy^^   T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections for you:   Whew... It was really tough day. >> CORRECT OR> I had a rough day.Because I slpet late at night, so my condition was bad. >> I slept late last night so my condition is bad. In this condition, I should have to play a basketball. >> In this condition, I should play basketball. [choose only one verb phrase-\"have to\" or \"should play\"]I\'m tired out again.>> CORRECT OR> I\'m not energetic.now? I think you are a good teacher. >> I now think that you are a good teacher. You always smile and give me an advice. >> CORRECT OR> You always encourage me. These make my skill improved. >> This improves my skill.Instead, Only what I feel sorry is that I can\'t make our talking more naturally.>>I only feel sorry that I can\'t converse more naturally.I hope I can express my opinion in English fluently as soon as possible. >> CORRECT >> I hope I can fluently express myself right away. Firsrt, it\'s a Franch speaking skill. I\'m learing French in a universitiy. >> First it\'s French speaking skill. I\'m studying french in a University. But it is too hard for me though it\'s a basic process. >> I find it difficult but then it\'s a basic process. Secound is a engineering skill. Because I want to fix my car if I have. >> Second is an Engineering skill because I want to fix my car if I own one.

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