it was a nice weekend.

2010-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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hi~ i feel that long time no see with you. how was your weekend? it was same the old weekend for me. but i went to the swimming pool on saturday. it's far from my home. there is the swimming pool mear my home. but it's under the construction. many people are in there. because it was the peak time and hot day. i can swim very well. especially, the most common one is called the freestyle. but i didn't learn the butterfly. the most difficult and exhausting stroke is the butterfly. swimming can help me cool down and give me a full-body work out. whin i go there, i was catching many young children taking swimming lessons around that time. i had a fun.

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Hello Tracy, I'm really happy to receive another composition from you.  I think you're right, I also feel that we haven't seen each other for a long time.  I missed you! I must say you had great weekend. Love,  Verna   hi~ i feel that long time no see with you. >>hi~ i feel that we didn't see each other for a long time.how was your weekend? >> Correctit was same the old weekend for me. >> It was the same old weekend for me.but i went to the swimming pool on saturday. >>but i went to the swimming pool on Saturday.it's far from my home. >> Correctthere is the swimming pool mear my home. >> There is a swimming pool near my home.but it's under the construction. >> But it's under construction.many people are in there. >>There are many people there.because it was the peak time and hot day. >> Correct >> Because it is the peak season and it is very hot. (better)i can swim very well. >> Correctespecially, the most common one is called the freestyle. >> Correctbut i didn't learn the butterfly. >>but i didn't learn the butterfly stroke.the most difficult and exhausting stroke is the butterfly. >> Correctswimming can help me cool down and give me a full-body work out. >> Correctwhin i go there, i was catching many young children taking swimming lessons around that time. >>when I go there, I was watching many young children taking swimming lessons around that time.i had a fun. >> I had fun.

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