IT was fun day!!!

2021-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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Today\'s school class was really fun. The reason is that there were many exciting classes like music and physical education. We sang songs and played baseball. It looks like a really exciting day. i like math I felt good because I did well on the exam. The second class was Korean language class, and I was given a \'mentos\' because I read the book well. Lesson 3 was music. We had a karaoke class. I also sang the song beautifully. The 4th class was physical education. We played a great and fun baseball game. One of the best days in my opinion.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

It looks like a really exciting day.
>>It was a really exciting day.

i like math I felt good because I did well on the exam.
>>I like Math and I felt good because I did well on the exam.

We played a great and fun baseball game.
>>We played and we had a fun baseball game.


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