It was great time.

2014-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1. This is __ book in the whole store. the most expensive 2. That shirt is __ than the other one. dirtier 3. Peter was laughing hard, but his wife was laughing even __! harder 4. He is __ man that I know. the strongest 5. Robert is never on time. He always arrives __ than the rest of us. later 6. That is __ song I've ever heard! the best 7. Your cat is __ than ours. smaller 8. I thought this test would be difficult, but it's __ test I've ever taken. the easiest 9. Out of all the films I've seen, this one is __. the saddest 10. Your answer is wrong, but it's __ than the other students' answers. more correct After drinking in beershop, we went to bowling center. We gathered idea and finally we set the rule. looser might pay all the money for the game. we started game. fortunately, I won the game. I scored 165!!! and we went to PC room. suddenly, we felt sleepy so we went to public bath which have room for sleeping. there were lots of people who have noisy nose. it was hard to sleep.

강사 첨삭

Hello,

I\'m happy with the result of your homework.

You really did  a good job.

I\'m so proud of you.

Continue to do your best in everything that you do.

Keep safe.

See you in class.

Goodbye!

T. Nina^^


1. This is __ book in the whole store.
the most expensive

>> CORRECT
2. That shirt is __ than the other one.
dirtier

>> CORRECT
3. Peter was laughing hard, but his wife was laughing even __!
harder

>> CORRECT
4. He is __ man that I know.
the strongest

>> CORRECT
5. Robert is never on time. He always arrives __ than the rest of us.
later

>> CORRECT
6. That is __ song I\'ve ever heard!
the best

>> CORRECT
7. Your cat is __ than ours.
smaller

>> CORRECT
8. I thought this test would be difficult, but it\'s __ test I\'ve ever taken.
the easiest

>> CORRECT
9. Out of all the films I\'ve seen, this one is __.
the saddest

>> CORRECT
10. Your answer is wrong, but it\'s __ than the other students\' answers.
more correct

>> CORRECT


After drinking in beershop, we went to bowling center.

>> After drinking at the beer shop, we went to the bowling center.
We gathered idea and finally we set the rule.

>> We gathered ideas and finally set up the rules.
looser might pay all the money for the game.

>> Losers will be the ones to pay for the game.
we started game.

>> So, we started the game.
fortunately, I won the game.

>> Fortunately, I won the game.
I scored 165!!!

>>CORRECT
and we went to PC room.

>> And then, we went to the PC room.
suddenly, we felt sleepy so we went to public bath which have room for sleeping.

>>Suddenly, we felt sleepy so we went to the public bath that has a room where we can sleep.
there were lots of people who have noisy nose.

>> There were lots of noisy people.
it was hard to sleep.

>> It was really hard to sleep there.^^

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