It was sleeting yesterday.
학생이 쓴 원문
It was sleeting yesterday.
It is not rain, not snow.
Anyway,
I can not understand that the good boxer like Manny is in Philippines.
Because Philippines have poor infrastructue for the boxing.
It is a miracle.
That is similar to Kim,Yuna in Korea.
Korea have poor infrastructure for the figure skating.
It is a miracle too.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
You have chosen the perfect word to describe the weather yesterday..
Sleet is partly frozen rain, or rain that freezes as it falls.
Anyway, because of Manny, our country has developed facilities to improve boxing training.
I’m sure Korea is also working on improving the infrastructure for figure skating because of Kim Yuna..^^
I can not understand that the good boxer like Manny is in Philippines.>> I can not understand that the good boxer like Manny is in the Philippines.
Because Philippines have poor infrastructue for the boxing.>> Because the Philippines have poor infrastructure for boxing.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.