It was supposed to my last homework today but there are so many thing I want to talk that I will do

Hi there Cassandra!

Thank you for sending me an essay tonight.

I enjoyed reading your composition. ^^ 

Please go over the corrections below for your improvement. 

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Teacher Nina

It was in March of the last year.

>> It happened in March of last year.

I am a Buddhist and our important creed is peace.

>> Correct! 

It means not only an anti-war or protecting the environment but a peace in person\'s mind philosophically.

>> Did you mean: It doesn\'t only mean anti-war or protecting the environment but also having a peaceful mind philosophically. 

The budda speaks that all people in the world have a certain possibility him/herself can be also the budda and happy.

>> Did you mean: Buddha says that all people in the world have a certain possibility that he/she can also be a Buddha and be happy.  

So I and my friends decided to start a club to let people realize the importance of the peace in mind as a university students in my campus.

>> Did you mean:  So my friends and I decided to start a club, to let the people realize the importance of having a peace of mind of university students in the campus. 

In order to found a new club, we had to pay high money to Club Association in my university and make a presentation which was used to explain our thinking to heads of another clubs.

>> In order to find a new club, we had to pay a high amount of money to the club association in my university and make a presentation. It was used to explain our thoughts/ ideas to the head of the other clubs. 

We passed two stages out of three and I spoke our will in front of all leaders of clubs.

>> We passed two out of the three stages and I spoke in front of all the leaders of the different clubs.

But our efforts to practice peace was frustrated because of prejudice.

>> Did you mean:  But our efforts to practice peace was not achieved because of prejudice. 

There are many communions in most of religions.

>> Correct! 

What I believe is also normal one communion originated in the buddhism but from Japan.

>> What I believe in is, a normal communion which originated from Buddhism in Japan.   

But most of korean don\'t like Japan because of scar colonized by Japan.

>> But most of Koreans don\'t like Japan because of the scars made by Japan.