It was that time when I have been to zoo located in Seoul.
학생이 쓴 원문
In there, I had some coconut fruit and absorbed the juice of it watching animal around.
It is summer time that we can play in the water.
Today\'s weather is too hot.
I delivered some product this morning.It was more easy than the first time.
I am sweating a lot now.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thanks again for doing your homework.
Have a great night!
Talk to you on Wednesday ☺
In there, I had some coconut fruit and absorbed the juice of it watching animal around.
>> In there, I had some coconut meat and drank its juice while watching the animals around.
>> In there, I had some coconut meat and drank its juice while watching the animals around.
It is summer time that we can play in the water.
>> In summer, we like playing with water.
>> In summer, we like playing with water.
Today\'s weather is too hot.
>> It\'s too hot today!
>> It\'s too hot today!
I delivered some product this morning.
>> I delivered some products this morning.
It was more easy than the first time.
>> It\'s easier now than before.
>> It\'s easier now than before.
I am sweating a lot now.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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