It was too hot to walk by foot
학생이 쓴 원문
It was very hot.
At noon,I went to the test shop from my office.
It took only 10 minutes by foot.
But it was too hot to walk.
Now, It is a little windy. (11 pm)
It is enough with an electric fan.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mr. [이름]!.I’m very glad that you sent me a composition.:)…I hope your doing good now. It’s quite windy outside but hopefully it will not rain later. Thank you so much!And hope to hear from you again.
It was very hot.
>>>It is very hot. (present tense)
>>>It was very hot this morning. (maybe this is what you mean)J
At noon,I went to the test shop from my office.
>>>At noon time, I went to the test shop from my office.(better)
>>>At noon time, I went to the drug testing shop from my office.( is this what you mean by "test shop"?)
It took only 10 minutes by foot.
>>>correct!!
But it was too hot to walk.
>>>correct!!
Now, It is a little windy. (11 pm)
>>>correct!!
It is enough with an electric fan.
>>>It is enough to have an electric fan.
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