It was very cold today

It was very cold today In the morning, when I came to my office I felt very cold because of the wind Anyway, I like our country because she has four season. In the spring, the flowers are in bloom in the summer, many people go to the sea in the autumn, the trees on the mountains turns their beautiful colors in the winter, the ground i covered with snow but, in this winter, I have never gone to ski In comming holiday, I plan to go to ski Good night, Shy

Hi [이름]!! Happy New Year!! This is actually good for you?You can improve not only your speaking skills but also your writing skills.. Keep on doing this.. And if you need my help for any composition then just write it here and I will check it? We only have two seasons here in the Philippines so you are very luck because you can see the beauty of nature in four different ways?^_^   See ya!!   Xoxoxo, T. Shy   Here are my corrections on your composition:   It was very cold today>> It was very cold todayIn the morning, when I came to my office>> CORRECT I felt very cold because of the wind>> CORRECT I like our country because she has four season.>> I like our country because it has four seasons. (we use she for people only) In the spring, the flowers are in bloom>> CORRECT in the summer, many people go to the sea>> CORRECT >> in the summer, many people go to the beach in the autumn, the trees on the mountains turns their beautiful colors>> in autumn, the trees on the mountains turn into their beautiful colors in the winter, the ground i covered with snow >> in winter, the ground is covered with snow but, in this winter, I have never gone to ski>> but this winter, I have never gone skiing.In comming holiday, I plan to go to ski>> In the coming holiday, I plan to go skiing