It will be a busy weekend.
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I have an apponitment this evening with a man who is my colleague.
And tomorrow I will date with my boyfriend.
I've been planning how we are going to spend tomorrow.
Maybe We are going to the cinema and going to the restaurant.
He is too busy to go away for recreation.
In sunday morning, I have to go Nouen for a part time job and then I
will meet friends.
I'm look forward to meeting them because I didn't saw much of them
owing to a friend who lives another city.
She will come to meet me with her baby boy 14-month old.
I miss my friends so much and miss her baby too.
Do you like a baby?
In my case, one reason why I want to marry is a baby.
I want a baby who is a totaly totaly cute, lovely and perfect.
I know It's just my wish. ^^
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Hi J!! It seems that you are fully loaded this weekend. You're going to be busy but I guess you will have a good time too. Yes, I always wanted to have my own baby. I don't know if I mentioned it before that I was the youngest among my siblings. I always wanted to have a younger sister/brother so I could take care of them. Every woman wishes to have totally cute, lovely and perfect children. I hope one day we'll have them. ^^ Have a great weekend J!! Take care!!!
Lei J
I have an apponitment this evening with a man who is my colleague.
>> I have an appointment with my colleague.
And tomorrow I will date with my boyfriend.>>And tomorrow, I will have a date with my boyfriend.
>> And I will have a date with my boyfriend tomorrow.I've been planning how we are going to spend tomorrow.>>correctMaybe We are going to the cinema and going to the restaurant.>> Maybe We are going to the cinema and eat in a restaurant.
>> We might go to the cinema and eat in a restaurant.He is too busy to go away for recreation.>>correct
>> He is too busy to have a recreation (>>better)In sunday morning, I have to go Nouen for a part time job and then I will meet friends.>>On Sunday morning, I have to go to Nouen for my part time job and then I will meet friends.I'm look forward to meeting them because I didn't saw much of them owing to a friend who lives another city.>>I'm looking forward of meeting them because I haven't seen them for a while and I owe my friend who lives in another city.She will come to meet me with her baby boy 14-month old.>>She will meet me with her 14-month old baby boy.I miss my friends so much and miss her baby too. >>I miss my friend so much and her baby, too.
>>I miss my friend so much as well as her baby.Do you like a baby?>>Do you like babies?In my case, one reason why I want to marry is a baby.>>For me, having a baby is one of the reasons why I wanted to get married.
>> In my case, one reason why I want to marry is having a baby.I want a baby who is a totally totally cute, lovely and perfect.>>I want a baby who is totally cute, lovely and perfect.
I know It's just my wish. ^^
>>correct
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