It would be very fun imagination!
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I sometimes buy lottery for pleasure of a week. Until about 2 years ago, I think that even though I win a lottery, I will work more. But at recent, as I get older my thought is changed. If I win big money, I\'ll quit my work immediately. I want to do other thing what I wish to at betimes. For example, something connected with dogs especially abandoned dogs. And I\'d like to travel many places in off season.
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Hello, Ju [이름]. It is interesting to imagine things that could be and I hope and wish they were true as well.^^ Thank you for taking the time and effort to do your homework and answer the question extensively. Have a wonderful evening. I\'ll talk to you tomorrow. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
It would be very fun imagination!
>> It would be fun to imagine that.
I sometimes buy lottery for pleasure of a week.
>> I sometimes buy lottery tickets in a week for pleasure.
Until about 2 years ago, I think that even though I win a lottery, I will work more.
>> CORRECT =)
But at recent, as I get older my thought is changed.
>> But recently, as I got older that thought has changed.
If I win big money, I\'ll quit my work immediately.
>> CORRECT =)
I want to do other thing what I wish to at betimes.
>> I want to do other things I wish to do betimes.
For example, something connected with dogs especially abandoned dogs.
>> CORRECT =)
And I\'d like to travel many places in off season.
>> And I\'d like to travel to many places in the off-season.
It would be very fun imagination!
>> It would be fun to imagine that.
I sometimes buy lottery for pleasure of a week.
>> I sometimes buy lottery tickets in a week for pleasure.
Until about 2 years ago, I think that even though I win a lottery, I will work more.
>> CORRECT =)
But at recent, as I get older my thought is changed.
>> But recently, as I got older that thought has changed.
If I win big money, I\'ll quit my work immediately.
>> CORRECT =)
I want to do other thing what I wish to at betimes.
>> I want to do other things I wish to do betimes.
For example, something connected with dogs especially abandoned dogs.
>> CORRECT =)
And I\'d like to travel many places in off season.
>> And I\'d like to travel to many places in the off-season.
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