Iwere do you see yourself when you are 70 yers old?

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Where do you see yourself when you are 70 years old?

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When i am 70 years old i am going to go to travel around the world.
>>When I will be 70 years old I am going to go travel around the world.

Old people goes to travel around the world is populer theseday in Korea.

>>Old people who travel around the world is popular these days in Korea.

>>OR: Traveling around the world when you bare old is famous in Korea these dyas.

so i will go with my husband. but what to traval , need much money.so i will be working in own restaurant.

>>So I will go with my husband. But to travel needs much money, so I will be working in my own restaurant.

I hope that my helthy be in good when i am 70 yeras old.

>>I hope that I am still healthy when I am 70 years old.

the Travel and the job help wich give many vitality for stable life.

>>Traveling and having a job are very vital for a stable life.