Iwha University
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
It\'s nice that you didn\'t take any test and you were able to visit a university.
I hope you\'ll have a fun trip next time.
Why not have a family trip this Chuseok, right?
I\'ll see you on Tuesday!
Have a great weekend!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
It is the college only girs can go.
>> correct
>> or: It is the college for girls only.
>> or: It is the college exclusive for girls.
It\'s best college for girls.
>> It\'s the best college for girls.
The college is too big.
>> correct
>> Tor: he college school is huge.
There are a lot of buildings.
>> correct
We went to natural museum because of no test.
>> We went to a natural museum because of no test.
>> or: We went to a natural museum because we don\'t have a test.
It was too boring.
>> correct
And we met previous young teacher.
>> And we met our previous young teacher.
Teacher didn\'t buy some foods but introduce the university.
>> The teacher didn\'t buy some foods ,but only introduced the university.
I was so hungry.
>> correct
The trip is not wonderful.
>> correct
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