Iwha University

2017-09-28 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

It is the college only girs can go.It's best college for girls.The college is too big.There are a lot of buildings.We went to natural museum because of no test.It was too boring.And we met previous young teacher.Teacher didn't buy some foods but introduce the university.I was so hungry.The trip is not wonderful.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


It\'s nice that you didn\'t take any test and you were able to visit a university.

I hope you\'ll have a fun trip next time.

Why not have a family trip this Chuseok, right?

I\'ll see you on Tuesday!

Have a great weekend!


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


It is the college only girs can go.

>> correct

>> or: It is the college for girls only.

>> or: It is the college exclusive for girls.

It\'s best college for girls.

>> It\'s the best college for girls.

The college is too big.

>> correct

>> Tor: he college school is huge.

There are a lot of buildings.

>> correct

We went to natural museum because of no test.

>> We went to a natural museum because of no test.

>> or: We went to a natural museum because we don\'t have a test.

It was too boring.

>> correct

And we met previous young teacher.

>> And we met our previous young teacher.

Teacher didn\'t buy some foods but introduce the university.

>> The teacher didn\'t buy some foods ,but only introduced the university.

I was so hungry.

>> correct

The trip is not wonderful.

>> correct

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