Jack and the Beanstalk
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Happy Monday! Thank you for writing the story of Jack. This is a wonderful story and I hope you have learned the moral of the story.
~Teacher Grace~
Here are the corrections I made on your story:
Jack\'s house is very poor.
>>Correct!
OR >> Jack\'s family is very poor.
So His mom tell him go to market and sell the cow.
>>One day, his mom asks him to go to the market and sell the cow.
So he goes to market.
>>He then goes to the market.
He meet old man on street.
>>He meets an old man on the street.
He says \"This been is magic been!! Change my bean!\"
>>He tells him, \"This bean is a magic bean! I want to exchange it with your cow.\"
So Jack get magic been.
>> So Jack takes the magic bean.
But Mom yells him and very mad.
>>At home, his mom yells at him and she is very mad.
Jack is very angry.
>> Correct.
He throws magic been on the ground,
>>He throws the magic bean on the ground.
Next day, ground has very long beanstalk!
>> Next day, a very long beanstalk grew on the ground.
He climbs and goes to monster\'s house.
>> He climbed it and he reached the monster\'s house.
And He stills many things.
>> He stole many things from the monster.
One day, Monster sees him and grasp at him!!!
>> One day, the monster saw and tried to grab him.
But Jack cut the beanstalk with ax.
>> But Jack ran and cut the beanstalk with an ax.
And than Monster falls down and die.
>> The monster fell down and died.
Also Jack\'s house is very rich and very happy^^
>> Jack\'s family is now very rich and happy.^^
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