Jan.1

Happy New Year. I stayed at home and I watched some movies. I felt like being pitiful by myself. I must make some friends in this city but it bothers me to make someone. Anyway, The new year already started. I hope that you all will be fill of luck in your life. Mr moon take care of your health because you are only one strong father in your home so i believe in mr moon will improve in english this year. Could you tell me about good or awesome words? Ms siyang don't worry about finding jobs. You are already beautiful and a honest girl.The heaven never give you up. You believe in yourself, Last jessica I 'm careful to tell you. maybe your blood type is A? It's mercy. I know your english is good but have a confidence in your english. I don't know suddenly why i wanna see the sea. I'd like to walk through the coast wherever i can go. But nowadays I'm being lazy and i feel like bothering to get there. I have to have some passion to be successful by myself.

Hi there, [이름]! Happy New Year! Splendid composition! What a nice way to start the year.   I made some corrections in your letter. Please take a look and study. Happy New Year. >> Correct! :)I stayed at home and I watched some movies. >> Correct! :)I felt like being pitiful by myself. >> I felt like being pitiful about myself. (Use of Preposition)I must make some friends in this city but it bothers me to make someone. >>I must make some friends in this city but it bothers me to approach someone. (Word Choice)Anyway, The new year already started. >> Anyway, the new year already started. (Capitalization)I hope that you all will be fill of luck in your life. >> I hope that you all will be filled with luck in your life. (Sentence Construction)Mr moon take care of your health because you are only one strong father in your home so i believe in mr moon will improve in english this year. >> Mr. [Name] takes care of his health because he is the strong father in his home. I believe that  Mr. [Name] will improve in his English communication skills this year. (Sentence Construction, Capitalization)Could you tell me about good or awesome words?>> Correct! :)Ms siyang don\'t worry about finding jobs. >> Ms. [Name] doesn\'t worry about finding a job. (Sentence Construction, Capitalization)You are already beautiful and a honest girl.The heaven never give you up. >>You are already a beautiful and an honest girl.The heaven will never give you up. (Sentence Construction)You believe in yourself, >> You believe in yourself. (Punctuation mark)Last jessica I \'m careful to tell you. maybe your blood type is A? >> Lastly, Jessica I just want to ask you if your blood type is A? (Sentence Construction)It\'s mercy. >>  Correct! :)I know your english is good but have a confidence in your english. >> I know your English is good but you need to have a confidence in using it. (Sentence Construction, Capitalization)I don\'t know suddenly why i wanna see the sea. >> I don\'t know why suddenly I wanna see the sea. (Sentence Construction)I\'d like to walk through the coast wherever i can go. >> I\'d like to walk through the coast and go wherever my feet leads me to. (Sentence Construction)But nowadays I\'m being lazy and i feel like bothering to get there. >> But nowadays, I\'m being lazy and I feel like bothered to get there. (Sentence Construction)I have to have some passion to be successful by myself. >> I need to have some passion to be successful. (Sentence Construction)