Jan.1.

However These days I'm getting cold feet to like someone. Definitely i don't know why i think of that. But I'm pretty sure as far as i've experienced was hurt to some girls. I don't know how to do what to do and to decide my mind. I'm confused about what i do. I don't hesitate to say something or someone. I feel like throwing up this part I hope to go to japan.but nowadays I heard from the media about japan. japan was devastated by radioactivity. I think it's a natural result because japan put korea china into trouble not long age. If God does exist,He would punish japan, Korean young girls and china girls were abuse from japanese man. I'm not obsessed by this issue. But nowadays japan government denys what they did. This is unjustified, I hope this problem would solve very well. When i lived in seoul I met some foreigners who asked me where to go in korea. I always said to them,Go to Jeju island. Seoul is not good and crowded you would be disappointed.

Hello, [이름]! I want to complement you for always writing wonderful essays in your composition board. Keep it up! I made some modifications in your letter. Please take  a look and study: However These days I\'m getting cold feet to like someone. >> However, these days I got cold feet to like someone. (Capitalization, Verb tense)Definitely i don\'t know why i think of that. >> Definitely, I don\'t know why I am thinking of that. (Sentence Construction)But I\'m pretty sure as far as i\'ve experienced was hurt to some girls.>> But I\'m pretty sure I might get hurt, as far as what  I\'ve experienced with some girls. (Sentence Construction)I don\'t know how to do what to do and to decide my mind. >> I don\'t know how to decide. (Sentence Construction)I\'m confused about what i do. >> I\'m confused about what I should do. OR YOU CAN SAY >> I\'m confused about what to do. OR YOU CAN SAY >> I\'m confused about what I did. (Verb tense) I don\'t hesitate to say something or someone.>> I don\'t hesitate to say something to someone. (Use of Preposition)I feel like throwing up this part >> I feel like throwing up this part. (Punctuation Mark)I hope to go to japan.but nowadays I heard from the media about japan. japan was devastated by radioactivity. >> I hope to go to Japan but I heard from the media that Japan was devastated by radioactivity. (Sentence Construction) I think it\'s a natural result because japan put korea china into trouble not long age. >> I think it\'s a natural consequence because Japan placed Korea and China into trouble not long ago. (Sentence Construction)If God does exist,He would punish japan, >>If God does exist, He would punish Japan.  (Capitalization, Punctuation Mark)Korean young girls and china girls were abuse from japanese man. >>Young Korean and Chinese girls were abused by Japanese men.   (Sentence Construction)I\'m not obsessed by this issue. But nowadays japan government denys what they did. >>I\'m not obsessed on this issue but nowadays the Japanese government denies what their people did. (Sentence Construction)This is unjustified, >> This is unjustified. (Punctuation Mark) I hope this problem would solve very well. >> I hope this problem will be solved very soon.(Verb Tense, word choice)When i lived in seoul I met some foreigners who asked me where to go in korea. >> When I was still living Seoul, I met some foreigners who asked me about the beautiful places  to go in Korea. (Sentence Construction)I always said to them,Go to Jeju island. >> I always tell them, \"Go to Jeju island\". (Verb Tense)Seoul is not good and crowded you would be disappointed. >> Seoul is not a good place to visit because it is crowded and you will just be disappointed.  (Sentence Construction)