Jan.29.2012.
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In my parents's case,They don't want to change their opinions for example i want to modify small things.
If they accepted my opinions,They would feel inconvenient and they must put me into tough situations,
Do you sometimes buy secondhand goods in a thrift store? what kinds of items have you bought?
I have never bought secondhand goods. As for me i'm always buying New items.
Because i prefer New goods smell.
If we bought something which made us fresh.
I like shopping but i told you before.
It's unusual for men to go to department store alone.
I know that the issue is different for me.
My girlfirend and i saw a person who did the shopping at the department store alone.
So i was excited about his acting.
But i would not do that situation in the future because it makes me so weird.
I must go shopping with my girlfirend if i have any change to buy something.
Have you ever bought anything on an impulse?
well i've bought some watches on an impulse when i was young.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!! I also love shopping and I have tried buying some item in a thrift shop. And I found it really economical. The items were still in good condition so I still want to buy things or second-hand item from a thrift shop. Take care and talk to you soon then.
Teacher Lara
In my parents\'s case,They don\'t want to change their opinions for example i want to modify small things.
>> In my parent\'s case, they don\'t want to change their opinions such as if I want to modify some things.If they accepted my opinions,They would feel inconvenient and they must put me into tough situations,
>> If they will agree on my opinions, they would feel inconvenient and they will put me into tough situations.Do you sometimes buy secondhand goods in a thrift store? what kinds of items have you bought?>> CorrectI have never bought secondhand goods. As for me i\'m always buying New items.
>> CorrectBecause i prefer New goods smell.
>> Because I prefer the smell of brand new goods.If we bought something which made us fresh.
>> CorrectI like shopping but i told you before.
>> I like shopping which I told you before.It\'s unusual for men to go to department store alone.
>> CorrectI know that the issue is different for me.
>> CorrectMy girlfirend and i saw a person who did the shopping at the department store alone.
>> CorrectSo i was excited about his acting.
>> So I was excited about what he\'s doing.But i would not do that situation in the future because it makes me so weird.
>> But I would not do that in the future because it makes me feel so weird.I must go shopping with my girlfirend if i have any change to buy something.
>> I must go shopping with my girlfriend if I have any idea to buy something.Have you ever bought anything on an impulse?
>> Correctwell i\'ve bought some watches on an impulse when i was young.
>> Well, I\'ve bought some watches on an impulse when I was young.
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