Jan.29.2012.

2012-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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In my parents's case,They don't want to change their opinions for example i want to modify small things. If they accepted my opinions,They would feel inconvenient and they must put me into tough situations, Do you sometimes buy secondhand goods in a thrift store? what kinds of items have you bought? I have never bought secondhand goods. As for me i'm always buying New items. Because i prefer New goods smell. If we bought something which made us fresh. I like shopping but i told you before. It's unusual for men to go to department store alone. I know that the issue is different for me. My girlfirend and i saw a person who did the shopping at the department store alone. So i was excited about his acting. But i would not do that situation in the future because it makes me so weird. I must go shopping with my girlfirend if i have any change to buy something. Have you ever bought anything on an impulse? well i've bought some watches on an impulse when i was young.

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Hi [이름]!!!  I also love shopping and I have tried buying some item in a thrift shop. And I found it really economical. The items were still in good condition so I still want to buy things or second-hand item from a thrift shop. Take care and talk to you soon then. Teacher Lara   In my parents\'s case,They don\'t want to change their opinions for example i want to modify small things. >> In my parent\'s case, they don\'t want to change their opinions such as if I want to modify some things.If they accepted my opinions,They would feel inconvenient and they must put me into tough situations, >> If they will agree on my opinions, they would feel inconvenient and they will put me into tough situations.Do you sometimes buy secondhand goods in a thrift store? what kinds of items have you bought?>> CorrectI have never bought secondhand goods. As for me i\'m always buying New items. >> CorrectBecause i prefer New goods smell. >> Because I prefer the smell of brand new goods.If we bought something which made us fresh. >> CorrectI like shopping but i told you before. >> I like shopping which I told you before.It\'s unusual for men to go to department store alone. >> CorrectI know that the issue is different for me. >> CorrectMy girlfirend and i saw a person who did the shopping at the department store alone. >> CorrectSo i was excited about his acting. >> So I was excited about what he\'s doing.But i would not do that situation in the future because it makes me so weird. >> But I would not do that in the future because it makes me feel so weird.I must go shopping with my girlfirend if i have any change to buy something. >> I must go shopping with my girlfriend if I have any idea to buy something.Have you ever bought anything on an impulse? >> Correctwell i\'ve bought some watches on an impulse when i was young. >> Well, I\'ve bought some watches on an impulse when I was young.

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