Jan.29.2012
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi.Teacher.
What did you do last weekend?
i've done alot of things with my girl on the weekend.
but it was not easy to hang out with someone.
because i don't know what i do to make me funny and also other people too.
you told me, i have to go to your friend's birthday.
Were you happy?
At that time,I was very ridiculous than i think.
I reflected on what i have done in the past.
I needed to be humble and to be modest.
I made alot of mistake at that time. i was boasting and about what i have and what i do for a living.
at that moment,I regret that my situations.
i must not do the same situations.
What kind of people type do you like?
I can not explain in detail about that.
But I pretty sure that don't like normal Korean women who are almost gold-diggers.
I've met them who made me to be rejectecd to meet some women.
I think that you don't know my opinion.
I've met most of women have the same patterns.
so I don't want to meet normal Korean women.
강사 첨삭
Hi there again [이름]!!! I had a great weekend. I had a great time with my friends. I hope i could have that same fun again this coming weekend. We\'ll talk more about this later.
Teacher Lara
Hi.Teacher.
>> Hi teacher.What did you do last weekend?
>> Correcti\'ve done alot of things with my girl on the weekend.
>> Correctbut it was not easy to hang out with someone.
>> Correctbecause i don\'t know what i do to make me funny and also other people too.
>> Because I don\'t know how to make myself and other people happy.you told me, i have to go to your friend\'s birthday.
>> CorrectWere you happy? >> CorrectAt that time,I was very ridiculous than i think.
>> CorrectI reflected on what i have done in the past.
>> CorrectI needed to be humble and to be modest.
>> CorrectI made alot of mistake at that time. i was boasting and about what i have and what i do for a living.
>> Correctat that moment,I regret that my situations.
>> That moment I regretted my doings.i must not do the same situations.>> CorrectWhat kind of people type do you like?
>> What kind of people do you like?I can not explain in detail about that.
>> CorrectBut I pretty sure that don\'t like normal Korean women who are almost gold-diggers.
>> CorrectI\'ve met them who made me to be rejectecd to meet some women.
>> CorrectI think that you don\'t know my opinion.
>> CorrectI\'ve met most of women have the same patterns.
>> Correctso I don\'t want to meet normal Korean women.
>> Correct
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