Jan.29.2012

2012-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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Hi.Teacher. What did you do last weekend? i've done alot of things with my girl on the weekend. but it was not easy to hang out with someone. because i don't know what i do to make me funny and also other people too. you told me, i have to go to your friend's birthday. Were you happy? At that time,I was very ridiculous than i think. I reflected on what i have done in the past. I needed to be humble and to be modest. I made alot of mistake at that time. i was boasting and about what i have and what i do for a living. at that moment,I regret that my situations. i must not do the same situations. What kind of people type do you like? I can not explain in detail about that. But I pretty sure that don't like normal Korean women who are almost gold-diggers. I've met them who made me to be rejectecd to meet some women. I think that you don't know my opinion. I've met most of women have the same patterns. so I don't want to meet normal Korean women.

강사 첨삭

Hi there again [이름]!!!  I had a great weekend. I had a great time with my friends. I hope i could have that same fun again this coming weekend. We\'ll talk more about this later. Teacher Lara   Hi.Teacher. >> Hi teacher.What did you do last weekend? >> Correcti\'ve done alot of things with my girl on the weekend. >> Correctbut it was not easy to hang out with someone. >> Correctbecause i don\'t know what i do to make me funny and also other people too. >> Because I don\'t know how to make myself and other people happy.you told me, i have to go to your friend\'s birthday. >> CorrectWere you happy? >> CorrectAt that time,I was very ridiculous than i think. >> CorrectI reflected on what i have done in the past. >> CorrectI needed to be humble and to be modest. >> CorrectI made alot of mistake at that time. i was boasting and about what i have and what i do for a living. >> Correctat that moment,I regret that my situations. >> That moment I regretted my doings.i must not do the same situations.>> CorrectWhat kind of people type do you like? >> What kind of people do you like?I can not explain in detail about that. >> CorrectBut I pretty sure that don\'t like normal Korean women who are almost gold-diggers. >> CorrectI\'ve met them who made me to be rejectecd to meet some women. >> CorrectI think that you don\'t know my opinion. >> CorrectI\'ve met most of women have the same patterns. >> Correctso I don\'t want to meet normal Korean women. >> Correct  

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