Jan.31.2012.

Hi What do you think of my composition? What did you do yesterday? I didn't do anything special yesterday. I just walked my girl friend home. This morning,i ate breakfast with my mommy who is not good at cooking. So i must learn cooking skills if i have any chance. I have held on eacting joy since i was born in my home. Except when i worked for company and when i was in the army. I think i like instant food because of my mommy's cook. I hope that my wifr is good at cooking or before i get a married i should study of making some food. I read a book that title is "Men are from Mars, Women are from Venus." I was touching What the book tells me is in detail about individual people. I'd like you to read the book which makes you satisfied. Does shopping Make you feel better? I think that normal people feel better than before they go shopping. Sometimes many people spend alot of money various places. But i can't complain of their situations because it's individual things.

Hi! Thank you for sending me your composition. I hope that you\'re okay. Don\'t give up! Learn English by heart and I know you can do it. Take Care always. Teacher Lara Hi What do you think of my composition? >>CorrectWhat did you do yesterday? >>CorrectI didn\'t do anything special yesterday. >>I didn\'t do anything specially yesterday.I just walked my girl friend home. >>I just visited my girlfriend\'s house.This morning,i ate breakfast with my mommy who is not good at cooking. >>Correct >>This morning, I ate breakfast with my mother who is not that good in cooking.So i must learn cooking skills if i have any chance. >>So I must learn cooking lessons if I have time. >>That is why I must learn how to cook different recipes if I have time.I have held on eacting joy since i was born in my home. >>When I was born, I brought joy to my family.Except when i worked for company and when i was in the army. >>Except when I was working in a company and when I was in the army.I think i like instant food because of my mommy\'s cook. >>I think I liked instant foods because my mom was not good in cooking different dishes.I hope that my wifr is good at cooking or before i get a married i should study of making some food. >>I hope that my future wife will have good skills in cooking or before I will get married I should learn how to cook diffferent kind of dishes.I read a book that title is \"Men are from Mars, Women are from Venus.\" >>I read a book that the title is \"Men are from Mars, Women are from Venus\".I was touching What the book tells me is in detail about individual people. >>I was amazed about the meaning of the story that tells me that individual people are different.I\'d like you to read the book which makes you satisfied. >>I\'d like you to read a book that will make you satisfied.Does shopping Make you feel better? >>CorrectI think that normal people feel better than before they go shopping. >>I think normal people feel better when they go shopping.Sometimes many people spend alot of money various places. >>Sometimes many people spend a lot of money going to various places.But i can\'t complain of their situations because it\'s individual things. >>But I can\'t complain with their situatuion because it\'s their choice. >>But I can\'t blame them for their choice of going for shopping.