Jan.31.2012.

i've met most of people who have the same pattern such as they are interested in something. in my brother's case,He likes the newest goods of Apple Goods and when i worked for company,one of my co-workers was collect adult video. He looked like neet,tidy but he liked them so I felt one thing at that time that we have to check people's personalities before making deeply someone. When you go grocery shopping, do you usually buy the same itesm very time or buy different things? I told you before, i have to survive in my home because of my mommy's cook. So i like instant food, if i go to grocery shopping which made me often bad. But i have to surivive in my home so my father and i like Lamen and just meat because it's easy to make some food. I heard from my mommy about my father. My daddy was not enough money to go to high school so my daddy worked for relative's store at that time since that. My father didn't like my grandparents. But i don't know my daddy doings.

HI! I had a great time reading your composition. Keep it up! I hope that the corrections are useful. Don\'t give up.I know you can do it. Take Care. Teacher Lara i\'ve met most of people who have the same pattern such as they are interested in something. >>I\'ve met people that has the same interests.in my brother\'s case,He likes the newest goods of Apple Goods and when i worked for company,one of my co-workers was collect adult video. >>In my brother\'s case, he likes the new goods of Apple Goods. When I worked in a company, one of my co-workers loves to collect adult videos.He looked like neet,tidy but he liked them so I felt one thing at that time that we have to check people\'s personalities before making deeply someone. >>He looked tidy and neat but I thinked that we should check a persons qualities first before getting attached to them.When you go grocery shopping, do you usually buy the same itesm very time or buy different things? >>When you go to the grocery store, do you usually buy the same items every time or do you buy new things?I told you before, i have to survive in my home because of my mommy\'s cook. >>I told you before, i have to survive my mother\'s cooking at home. >>I told you before, i have to survive my mother\'s food at home.So i like instant food, if i go to grocery shopping which made me often bad. >>So i liked instant food and whenever I go to the grocery store it makes me feel bad.But i have to surivive in my home so my father and i like Lamen and just meat because it\'s easy to make some food. >>But I have to survive at home. My dad and I liked Lamen, It is just a meat and it\'s easy to make food with taht.I heard from my mommy about my father. >>I heard a story from my mother about my father.My daddy was not enough money to go to high school so my daddy worked for relative\'s store at that time since that. >>My dad doesn\'t have enough money to go to highschool. He worked in a store that was owned by one of our relative.My father didn\'t like my grandparents. >>CorrectBut i don\'t know my daddy doings. >>But I don\'t know what my dad did about that.