JanE~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Jane ~
I was pleased with your class.
I think our class time(10 minutes) is always short. I have many thinking about talking. But, I don't always speak everything that I wanted to speak to you(whoever). So I want to study English speaking. I want to speak English very well, fluently.
I have still fear speaking with foreigner. So I have to practice comfortablely.
I will always make an effort.
Could you help me ?
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
You can count on me ofcourse! I am very much willing to help you speak in English fluently, but we must work hand in hand to have this done okay? You actually already have a good starting point when it comes to sentence construction, and just more practice and passion, in just a wink of an eye you could be a genius when it comes to speaking in English. And yes, 10 minutes is short for you who has a lot of potentials in being a fluent speaker, you may want to enroll for a longer speaking session, you can always contact our Korean manager for any arrangements. Good luck!
T.Jane
Hello Jane ~I was pleased with your class.
>> Correct!
>> or (you can also say) I was happy or pleased with our class.I think our class time(10 minutes) is always short.
>> I think, 10 minutes is too short for our class. I have many thinking about talking.
>> I have many thoughts that I can talk with you. But, I don\'t always speak everything that I wanted to speak to you(whoever).
>> I cannot say everything that I wanted to say to you or to anybody. So I want to study English speaking.
>> That\'s the reason why I want to study English.
I want to speak English very well, fluently.
>> I want to speak English very well.
>> or I want to speak English fluently.I have still fear speaking with foreigner.
>> I still have a fear of speaking to a foreigner So I have to practice comfortablely.
>> I have to practice so that I can speak comfortably.I will always make an effort.
>> Correct!Could you help me ?
>> Can you help me?
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