Jane
학생이 쓴 원문
When i first log in was well, but i was changed my password then it showed error massage pop up(I didn't remeber massage exactly but it seems likes error) that it is not complecated pass word again and again.
After then i could not log in TDS site.
Jane, I'm very confusing and worrying my situation.
In terms of studying English,Whether go aborad or not.
Which better do you think?
I'm always afraid about writting Eng. and speaking.
Sending a email right that is always give me a stress and trimble situation.
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I want to get off my situation and I want to study English more comfotably without stress.
I always keep a big stone in my mind.
How could i do best way?
Tomorrow is last day of our class. next time we can talk more time than that.
see ya
강사 첨삭
Dear [이름],
Stress is a normal part of life. You just have to figure out ways to cope with it. Let's talk about this in class.
T. Jane
When i first log in was well, but i was changed my password then it showed error massage pop up(I didn't remember massage exactly but it seems likes error) that it is not complecated pass word again and again.After then i could not log in TDS site.>>My first log in went well. But when I changed my password, an error message popped up (I didn't remember the exact message but it seems like an error) which said over and over agian that it was not a valid password.Jane, I'm very confusing and worrying my situation.
>>Jane, I'm very confused and worried about this situation.In terms of studying English,Whether go aborad or not.
>>In terms of studying English, I'm still deciding whether to go abroad or not.Which better do you think?
>>Which one do you tihink is better?I'm always afraid about writting Eng. and speaking.
>>I'm always afraid about writing and speaking in English.Sending a email right that is always give me a stress and trimble situation.
>>Sending a correct email always gives me stress and puts me in terrible situation.I want to get off my situation and I want to study English more comfotably without stress.
>>I want to get out of this situation and study English comfortably without stress.I always keep a big stone in my mind.
>>CORRECTHow could i do best way?>>What is the best thing that I can do?Tomorrow is last day of our class.
>>Tomorrow is the last day of our class.
next time we can talk more time than that.
>>Next time, we have more time to talk about that.see ya
>>CORRECT
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