Jane~article summary ^^

Teacher Jane, I'm sorry for the last Friday. Honesly, I had stayed up so late the other night I couln't answer your phone call. Sorry~ And this is the summary of today's article which I read. Please read and correct some errors or mistakes. ^^ Due to the recent crimes happening around elemetary schools, the sale of the self-defense gadgets such as alarm, whistle, sprayers or so has increased of 24 percent compared to a month earlier. According to eBay Auction, the major customers of the goods are of their 30s and early 40s who must be the parents of elementary schoolchildren.

Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for another composition from you. I encourage you to write whenever you have time. You are good at speaking and writing as well! Have a great time! Jane ^^   Teacher Jane, I'm sorry for the last Friday. >> Teacher Jane, I'm sorry about last Friday. Honesly, I had stayed up so late the other night I couln't answer your phone call. Sorry~ >> Honestly, I stayed up so late last Thursday night so I couldn't answer your phone call. And this is the summary of today's article which I read. >> correct >> This is the summary of the article which I read for today's class. - better Please read and correct some errors or mistakes. ^^ >> correct Due to the recent crimes happening around elemetary schools, the sale of the self-defense gadgets such as alarm, whistle, sprayers or so has increased of 24 percent compared to a month earlier. >> Due to the recent crimes that are happening around elementary schools, selling of self-defense gadgets such as alarm, whistle, sprayers or so has increased by 24 percent compared to a month earlier. According to eBay Auction, the major customers of the goods are of their 30s and early 40s who must be the parents of elementary schoolchildren. >> According to eBay Auction, majority of the customers of these goods are people in their 30s and early 40s who must be the parents of elementary schoolchildren.