Japan
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I heard the real reasons about canceling festival of Japan.
Recently Japan supports diplomatically the Taiwan, so China is angry .
China has banned Japan travel of Chinese in political retaliation .
It seems that Japan responed as canceling festival.
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Good afternoon, Ms. [이름]!
It was shocking information for me, and I was not ready for this. haha!
I may say that you have a good point because recently, I read a news article about China banning people from traveling in Japan, and this could be a reason to cancel their festival. However, my thought goes to those people who would like to witness the Cherry blossom but got involved due to these countries\' conflict.
Aki~
I heard the real reasons about canceling festival of Japan.
>> I heard the real reasons for canceling festival of Japan.
Recently Japan supports diplomatically the Taiwan, so China is angry .
>> Recently, Japan has supported Taiwan diplomatically, so China is angry.
China has banned Japan travel of Chinese in political retaliation .
>> China has banned its citizen to travel to Japan as a political retaliation.
It seems that Japan responed as canceling festival.
>> It seems that Japan responded by canceling the festival.
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