japan
학생이 쓴 원문
I like travling and I\'m gonna travle to many countries. I want to go to Japan. Japanese are Kind. And Japan is so qiet.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mi Ri!
Thank you for submitting this composition. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about traveling. I hope that you\'ll be able to travel to the places you want to go soon.
Have a nice day and take care!
~Teacher Gina
I like travling and I\'m gonna travle to many countries. I want to go to Japan. Japanese are Kind. And Japan is so qiet.
>> I like traveling and I\'m going to travel to many countries. I want to go to Japan because Japanese are kind people and it is quiet there.
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