Japanes
학생이 쓴 원문
I used to enjoy ramen when there was a delicious Japanese ramen restaurant in front of my house.
After that, I can\'t enjoy Japanese food in particular.
I don\'t even like sashimil, but I cant eat it because of my health.
강사 첨삭
Hi again, Ms. [Name]!
I understand, as people get older, they tend to be [이름]dful and careful of what they eat. I guess I have to be doing that as early as now.
Great day ahead!
Aki~
I used to enjoy ramen when there was a delicious Japanese ramen restaurant in front of my house.
>>> I used to enjoy ramen when there was a delicious Japanese ramen restaurant right in front of my house.
After that, I can\'t enjoy Japanese food in particular.
>>> CORRECT!
I don\'t even like sashimil, but I cant eat it because of my health.
>>> I don\'t even like sashimi, but I can\'t eat it because of my health.
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