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Let me tell you about something different on my last trip to Japan which is 10 years ago.

>> Let me tell you something about my last trip to Japan 10 years ago.

compared to Korea. Japanese people can\'t speak english well than I expected.

>> Compared to Korea, Japanese can\'t speak English well than expected.

 Actually, many Korean who graduates high school can speak English. of course, they\'re not fluently. 

>> Actually, many Korean who graduates high school can speak English. of course, they\'re not fluently. 

 When I asked to way to Hotel or any other strange place, I felt irritated that they can\'t understand my english.

>> When I asked directions on a Hotel or any other strange places, I felt irritated since they can\'t understand my English.

But they\'re really nice people, so they explained the way as body language until I knew.

>>But they\'re really nice people, they use their body language until I understand them.

Otherwise, Korean people feel nervous when Foreigners suddenly asked to way, and avoid to talk with them (Nowadays, Korean people are getting more kind, though).

>> On the other hand, Koreans feel nervous when Foreigners suddenly asked the way, and they avoid talking to them (Nowadays, Korean people are getting more kind, though).

and there already were many restaurants for \"One people\", which mosts of seats are available for one person, I think Japanese people is so individual and busy.

>> and there already were many restaurants for \"One people\", where in most seats are available for one person, I think Japanese lives an individual and busy life.

(Nowadays, More and more restaurant for \"One people\" opened)

>> (Nowadays, More and more restaurant for \"One people\" are being opened)