Japanese Life 1

Hi there [이름]!

Thank you for making your composition. You are fast! I will expect your next composition tomorrow. I envy you. I, too would like to visit Japan one day. It\'s one of my dream destination since I was young. I\'m looking forward to your next adventure. See you in class!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I went to the Fukuoka in Japan with my girl friend last week. 

>> I went to Fukuoka in Japan with my girl friend last week. 
 First day, we had difficulty with finding our first accommodation, because the rail roads in japan were complicated.

>> On our first day in Japan, we had difficulty finding our first accommodation because the rail roads in Japan are complicated.

If you arrive a normal station in Japan, you can see 5-6 platforms.

>> If you arrive  in a normal station in Japan, you can see 5-6 platforms.

So, we had long time to know which one is best way to go to our first accommodation.

>> So, it took us along time to know which one is  the best way to go to our first accommodation.

When we arrived there, we were exhausted.

>> correct!

After arranging our baggage, we sleeped. 

>> After arranging our baggage, we slept. 
 Second day, we went to the Kokura castle.

>> On the second day, we went to the Kokura castle.

This castle is made up of 3 parts (kokura castle, the garden of kokura castle and Seiichi Matsumoto memorial hall).

>> correct!

In korkura castle, we could see swords, a carriage and the miniature of Kokura town in 17c.

>> In korkura castle, we saw swords, a carriage and the miniature of Kokura town in the 17th century.

 In Seiichi Matsumoto memorial hall, we could see many his novels, pens and so on.

>>  In Seiichi Matsumoto memorial hall, we saw many of his novels, pens and so on.

However, we could not enter to the garden of Kokura castle, because the closing time in this place was 5 p.m. So, we were sad...

>> correct!

Please, expect the next series.

>> correct!