Japanese life 10
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
And on to the next scene...
Take care!
~T. Lynn
When we arrived at the character shop, it was 9:00 p.m.
>> correct!
However, in Japan most stores closed at 9p.m, but we didn\'t know that.
>> However, in Japan most stores close at 9:00 p.m. but we didn\'t know that.
Fortunately, we were permitted to shop there by a clerk.
>> correct!
But, we had only about 5 minutes. So my girl friend chose ones she wanted in 5 minutes.
>> But we are only given about 5 minutes. So my girlfriend chose the ones she wanted in 5 minutes.
At the moment, her pupils looked like firing and her facial expression was likely to represent to be bound to pick ones up. Fianlly, she chose them she loved and got a doll very cheaply because we bought something over 3,000 yens in the store.
>> At that moment, her pupils looked like they\'re on fire and her facial expression was likely to represent to be bound to pick ones up. Finally, she chose them because she loved them and got a doll very cheaply because we bought something over 3,000 yens in the store.
The doll\'s name was Pooh which was a kind of bear dolls After spectacle shopping, she was very happy because she was covered with many cute things.
>> The doll\'s name was Pooh which is a stuff toy. After shopping, she was very happy because she was covered with many cute things.
When we came back to our accommodation, we were hungry.
>> correct!
So we determined to eat most of the rest of sushis and sashimis.
>> So we were determined to eat most of the rest of the sushi and sashimi.
After enjoying them, we changed our clothes to pajamas which we bought at the discounted market.
>> correct!
When we went to bed, we felt sorry that we would leave this country tomorrow.
>> correct!
Please the next series.
>> Please wait/expect for the next series.
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