Japanese life 11
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Your adventure in Japan ended in a happy note so that\'s great. I guess your next trip abroad will be two years from now after you military service. Well, at least you had a memorable trip in Japan before going in!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
On the sixth day, it was the last day we could spend in Japan.
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So, we were sorry about it. Anyway, we ate the rest of the sushis and sashimis we bought yesterday and went to the airport by taking a taxi because the departure time for Incheon in Korea was 9:50 am.
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When we arrived in Korea at 11:00 am, we needed to deal with the souvenirs we bought on our trip.
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So, we thought how we made the souvenirs look like fabulous.
>> So we thought of a way to make the souvenirs look fabulous.
Finally, we decided to buy some packaging materials and write a memo to cover our souvenirs.
>> Finally, we have decided to buy some packaging materials and wrote a note to cover our souvenirs.
Because our souvenirs and other baggage were very heavy and bulky, we decided to cover them and write a brief memo separately in a cafe near to where we were.
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After packaging all of them, we were hungry and were determined to eat Chinese dishes in a restaurant.
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After eating the dishes, lastly we said each other \'Good bye, it was very fun and rewarding trip and I won\'t forget the trip with you.\'
>> After eating the dishes, we said to each other \'Good bye, it was very fun and rewarding trip and I won\'t forget the trip with you.\'
Thank you for reading.
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