Japanese life 6

Hello there [이름]!

I\'ll be waiting for the continuation of this series.....

Take care!

~T. Lynn

On the fourth day, we were going to go to the Yufuin village.

>> On the fourth day, we went to the Yufuin village.

After we ate the breakfast the hotel served, we went to there.

>> After eating breakfast that the hotel served, we went there.

When we got there, it was cold and snowy. So, we felt so cold and were eager to seek for hot dishes.

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Finally, we were able to go to the restaurant which serve warm beef and chicken with suitable vegetables.

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But, the dish was expensive, though it was very delicious and plentiful.

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After eating, we felt full.

>> After eating, we were full.

To digest the dishes, we decided to walk around the village that was known as if the village makes people be in a tale.

>> To digest the dishes, we decided to walk around the village that was known for making  people look like they are in a tale.

In walking around, we were able to find a ricksaw man.

>> While walking around, we were able to find a ricksaw man.

My girl friend had wanted to ride it from starting our trip.

>> My girl friend had wanted to ride it from the start of our trip.

So, we decided to ride it. While we were riding it, the ricksaw man told us many things about the village in English and Korean, because we couldn\'t hear Japanese.

>> So, we decided to ride it. While we were riding it, the ricksaw man told us many things about the village in English and Korean, because we couldn\'t understand Japanese.

The words he told was interesting and it was fantastic for us to look aroud the village. 

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 Please, expect the next series.

>> correct!