Japanese life 7

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And so the adventure continues...

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T. Lynn!

When we got off the ricksaw, we saw a lake made up of water of a hot spring and that of a common lake.

>> When we got off the rickshaw, we saw a lake made up of water from a hot spring and that of a common lake.

The combination made a fresh scenery that shows rising smoke from the lake.

>> correct!

However, in this time the hard wind blowed to us, though we decided to devote all mind in the scenery, because we would be hard to see it again.

>> However at that time the wind was blowing hard. But we have decided to devote our time in the scenery because it would be hard to see it again.

After struggling, but enjoying it, we came back Yufuin station.

>> After struggling but enjoying it, we went back to Yufuin station.

While we were coming back, we saw many character souvenir in shops and entered into a Japanese drama museum.

>> While we were coming back, we saw many character souvenir  shops and entered into a Japanese drama museum.

Last, we determined to eat a udon.

>> Lastly, we were determined to eat Udon.

However, when we ordered it and checked the departure time of the train we shoud get on, the time was 15 minutes until the train left off this station.

>> However, when we ordered it and checked the departure time of the train we should get on, the time was 15 minutes before the train departs this station.

So, we asked the cooker for making it more quickly.

>> So we asked the cook to make/prepare it quicker.

Fortunately, we ate it, but very quickly and we got on the train on time.

>> Fortunately, we were able to ate it though very quickly and we got on the train on time.

When we sit on our seats, we feel a stomachache, because of our fast eating, though our feeling was good and relaxed.

>> When we were on our seats, we had stomachache because of eating fast, though we were feeling good and relaxed.
 Please expect the next series.

>> correct!