Japanese people

Japanese people are personally not bad, I think; individually they are very polite, courteous, diligent and law abiding people, and their life style is frugal, so they deserves to be respected due to their good characters. But thinking of their nationality back to the period during their colonization, most of them were arrogant, and despised our culture and people, treating us as the uncivilized. They exploited our natural resources and labors relentlessly. They not only staked out here and there in our country without our permission and took the land, but also recruited our young generation to send them into the battle fields, into the coal mines, and sent our girls to let them comfort japanese soldiers in the battle fields during World War II.

Hi Ms. [Name].!

I loved your composition because of the deep thoughts you were able to bring out. I can view the damage that the Japanese colonization brought in your country. Nonetheless, we have to be happy because, at least, you have attained your freedom.

Anyway, I have checked your composition. Hope you could try going over. ^^,

Have a great night! Take care!

Lei :-)

Japanese people are personally not bad, I think; individually they are very polite, courteous, diligent and law abiding people, and their life style is frugal, so they deserves to be respected due to their good characters.

>> Japanese people are personally not bad. Individually, they are very polite, courteous, diligent, and law-abiding people. Their lifestyle is frugal, so they deserve to be respected due to their good characteristics.
But thinking of their nationality back to the period during their colonization, most of them were arrogant, and despised our culture and people, treating us as the uncivilized.

>> But thinking back to their colonization, most of them were arrogant. They despised our people and culture and treated us like uncivilized.
They exploited our natural resources and labors relentlessly.

>> Correct.