Jeff homework

2013-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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My worst experience was stepping on a dog's poop on my way home. I was an horrible day I was 8 yeas old at that time I don't want to think about it any more. It didn't smell good.

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Hi Jeff! This is a terrible experience. This also happened to me when I was a kid. It\'s very frustrating too. I hope it will never happen to the both of us again. Here are the corrections to the homework I gave you. See you tomorrow. Smile so you can even be more handsome! Goodnight! --T. WENDY My worst experience was stepping on a dog\'s poop on my way home. >> Correct I was an horrible day >> It was a horrible day.I was 8 yeas old at that time>> Correct I don\'t want to think about it any more.>> I don\'t want to think about it anymore.It didn\'t smell good. >> Correct  

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