Jeff homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Have you ever thought of giving up? What happened? Tell me about it.
When I was playing badminton, I had a problem
and I gave up badminton. A that time my ranking in
Jeju was the 1st.I liked to play badminton
but I coudn't. I'm not doing badminton
so I'm playing soccer.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jeff!
What\'s was the problem?
Why do you have to give up on playing?
Maybe you can tell me tomorrow.
See you!
--T. WENDY
When I was playing badminton, I had a problem and I gave up badminton.
>> When I was playing badminton, I had a problem so I gave up on the sport.
A that time my ranking in Jeju was the 1st.
>> A that time my ranking in Jeju was on the 1st place.
I liked to play badminton but I coudn\'t.
>> Correct
I\'m not doing badminton so I\'m playing soccer.
>> I don\'t play badminton so I\'m playing soccer.
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