Jeff homework

2013-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Belle

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>>HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ESSAY~What images spring to mind when you hear the word 'love'?How important is love? My mom cares me alot, so I think that is love. Sometimes I think love is very important. If someone doesn't get any love that can be very sad. So I think every people needs to get love.

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Hi Jeff, I appreciate you sending in this composition for tonight. I know pretty sure that your mom loves you so much! Don\'t worry,be happy!:)  I will definitely help you upgrade your speaking skills. And I am sure that you will also do your part to be able to reach your goal.   There are a lot of ways for you to be able to improve. See you in class Jeff.:))   T.Belle=)   ESSAY~What images spring to mind when you hear the word \'love\'?How important is love?My mom cares me alot, so I think that is love. >>My mom takes care of me a lot, so, I think that is love.Sometimes I think love is very important. >>correct!:))If someone doesn\'t get any love that canbe very sad. >>OR:If nobody loves someone, it can be very sad.So I think every people needs to get love. >>So, I think everyone needs to be loved. >>OR:So, I think everybody needs love.

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