Jeff homework
학생이 쓴 원문
>>HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY~What images spring to mind when you hear the word 'love'?How important is love?
My mom cares me alot, so I think that is love.
Sometimes I think love is very important.
If someone doesn't get any love that can
be very sad.
So I think every people needs to get love.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jeff,
I appreciate you sending in this composition for tonight.
I know pretty sure that your mom loves you so much!
Don\'t worry,be happy!:)
I will definitely help you upgrade your speaking skills.
And I am sure that you will also do your part to be able to reach your goal.
There are a lot of ways for you to be able to improve.
See you in class Jeff.:))
T.Belle=)
ESSAY~What images spring to mind when you hear the word \'love\'?How important is love?My mom cares me alot, so I think that is love.
>>My mom takes care of me a lot, so, I think that is love.Sometimes I think love is very important.
>>correct!:))If someone doesn\'t get any love that canbe very sad.
>>OR:If nobody loves someone, it can be very sad.So I think every people needs to get love.
>>So, I think everyone needs to be loved.
>>OR:So, I think everybody needs love.
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