Jeff homework

2014-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Lexi

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: CREATIVE WRITING: In your opinion, which of the following pose a threat to privacy? 1. Cookies on your PC 2. CCTV in supermarkets, Safety cameras in the street 3. Employers monitoring employees' use of the internet and email 4. Hidden cameras in private homes (e.g. to check on babysitters) 5. Banks keeping tabs on your financial history 6. Mobile phones with tracking systems I think number1. is the badest thing in privacy

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Hi there Jeff!
How are you tonight? I hope your doing perfectly fine.
Well, thanks for doing your homework. Hmm, it\'s very short though. (hahaha)
You can always expound your answer or explain further. ^^
Have a great night!
Teacher Lexi
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
CREATIVE WRITING:
In your opinion, which of the following pose a threat to privacy?
1. Cookies on your PC
2. CCTV in supermarkets, Safety cameras in the street
3. Employers monitoring employees\' use of the internet and email
4. Hidden cameras in private homes (e.g. to check on babysitters)
5. Banks keeping tabs on your financial history
6. Mobile phones with tracking systems
I think number1. is the badest thing in privacy
>>I think number 1 is the biggest threat to privacy.

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