Jeff homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Composition Writing:
~ Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer?
I think its same , cause I think that the movie story is more
needed than the design.
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Hi Jeff!
A great night to you! ^^ Your answer definitely makes sense! I agree with you.
Thanks for your patience in doing your homework.
Sleep tight and rest well!
Teacher Lexi
Here\'s my correction:
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Composition Writing:
~ Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer?
I think its same , cause I think that the movie story is more needed than the design.
>>I think it\'s same because the movie story is more important that the design.
>>OR: I think the purpose doesn\'t matter, the movie story is more important than the design.
A great night to you! ^^ Your answer definitely makes sense! I agree with you.
Thanks for your patience in doing your homework.
Sleep tight and rest well!
Teacher Lexi
Here\'s my correction:
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Composition Writing:
~ Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer?
I think its same , cause I think that the movie story is more needed than the design.
>>I think it\'s same because the movie story is more important that the design.
>>OR: I think the purpose doesn\'t matter, the movie story is more important than the design.
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