Jeff homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
CREATIVE WRITING:
~ Violence: Is it ever okay to hit a child?
No I don't think so. Becasue there is a law
that anyone is to be protected by violence.
And kids should be more protected by the law.
Even though kids make serious mistakes, adults must
take care of them and forgive them instead of hitting.
Kids should be loved and be taken care of by adults.
강사 첨삭
A superb night Jeff!
You impressed me with your answers tonight. It\'s very important that we know our rights so we protect ourselves.
I agree with you that children should be loved by adults. But adults deserve respect and love in return too.
Anyway, be safe and sound tonight!
Teacher Lexi :)
Here are my corrections:
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:CREATIVE WRITING:~ Violence: Is it ever okay to hit a child?No I don\'t think so. Becasue there is a law that anyone is to be protected by violence.
>>No, I don\'t think so because there is a law that anyone is to be protected from violence.
>>No, I don\'t think so because there is a law that everyone should be protected from violence.
And kids should be more protected by the law.
>>Correct :)Even though kids make serious mistakes, adults must take care of them and forgive them instead of hitting.
>>Correct **)Kids should be loved and be taken care of by adults.
>>Kids should be loved and be taken cared of by adults.
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