Jeff homework

2014-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 Lexi

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Please answer the question that follow. Make at least 3 or more sentences. ~ If you could have one superpower, what would it be and why? First of all, I want to have a power that can fly to travel all around the world And I want to be super smart so that I can pass all my exams. And the last one is that I want to do a all of the magic.

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Hi Jeff! A beautiful night ahead! Wow, I would love to have all those kinds of powers too. It will make my life more comfortable. I just wish! Anyway, thanks for sending this in. Please just go over my corrections. Teacher Lexi ^^ HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Please answer the question that follow. Make at least 3 or more sentences.~ If you could have one superpower, what would it be and why?First of all, I want to have a power that can fly to travel all around the world >>First of all, I want to have the power to fly so I can travel around the world. And I want to be super smart so that I can pass  all my exams. >>Correct ^^ And the last one is that I want to do a all of the magic. >>And the last one is that, I want to do all kinds of magic.  

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