Jekyll&Hyde

2011-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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Today, I went to the theater and watched a musical, Jekyll&Hyde. It was the second time for me to watch the musical. The story was as followings; Jekyll was a doctor who wanted to distinguish goodness and badness in a person. He researched the way to distinguish those two personalities and he finally invented new drugs. Also, he injected the drug on his arms by himself and he distinguished those two personalities. Although Jekyll and Hyde was the same person, Jekyll was symbolized the goodness and Hyde was symbolized the badness. Also, Hyde was getting stronger and stronger and he committed a lot of crimes. Finally, Hyde was killed by the people because of his violence.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you for sharing your experience with the musical. I hope that I could also see the play sometime. See you again tomorrow! T.Faye   Here are some of your corrections: Today, I went to the theater and watched a musical, Jekyll&Hyde. >>Correct!It was the second time for me to watch the musical.>>It was my second time to watch the misucal.The story was as followings; >>The story is about,Jekyll was a doctor who wanted to distinguish goodness and badness in a person. >>A doctor, named Jekyll, who wanted to distinguished the good and bad personalities of a person.He researched the way to distinguish those two personalities and he finally invented new drugs. >>He researche a way on how to distinguish them and he found a solution by inventing drugs.Also, he injected the drug on his arms by himself and he distinguished those two personalities. >>He injected the drug to himself so that he will have a n idea on how to do it.Although Jekyll and Hyde was the same person, Jekyll was symbolized the goodness and Hyde was symbolized the badness. >>Correct!Also, Hyde was getting stronger and stronger and he committed a lot of crimes. >>Correct!Finally, Hyde was killed by the people because of his violence. >>Correct!

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