jenny ~~~
학생이 쓴 원문
jenny ~~~ I'm sorry ~~
I heard my record in our class
that's terrible ~~ I hardly prepared for your call.
I couldn't hear it. I felt pity while listening my record
I was kept saying strange words to you.
you're amazing to hear my strange expressions that no one understand
You may be improve your endurance. do you?
I hope I get your call when I fresh, but It is difficult for me to fit on time.... In the morning, I was asleepng while talking to you
I have many prombles to be Improve for our class
To be up my Enlish skill, I must be more harder
Or I will not better than now. Just stay this level
I'm thinking about that...
I couldn't follow myself in my mind,,is thiss expression right? kkk
Have a great weekend : )
강사 첨삭
[이름],
I understand what you are going through. I must have said before, English is really a tedious journey. You have to make lots of sacrifices for it. I know that your job is taking most of your time and energy. I feel the same way. But, if you really want to be better, you should try to do something. You should keep on moving forward even if you take one little step at a time. That is better than not doing anything at all. I believe in your capabilities. I know you can do it! ^^
XOXO, Jenny
jenny ~~~ I'm sorry ~~
>>Correct.I heard my record in our class
>> I heard our class’ recording.
that's terrible ~~ I hardly prepared for your call.
>> It’s terrible and I sounded like I didn’t prepare at all.I couldn't hear it. I felt pity while listening my record
>> I heard it and I pitied myself.I was kept saying strange words to you.
>> I kept saying strange words to you.you're amazing to hear my strange expressions that no one understand
>>You were amazing because you were able to understand those expressions.You may be improve your endurance. do you?>> You must have improved your endurance.I hope I get your call when I fresh, but It is difficult for me to fit on time....
>>I hope to get your call when I’m fully awake but it’s difficult to fit the time schedule.
In the morning, I was asleepng while talking to you
>>In the morning, I am half-asleep while talking to you.I have many prombles to be Improve for our class
>> I have to improve for our class.To be up my Enlish skill, I must be more harder
>> To improve my English, I must study harder.Or I will not better than now. Just stay this level >> Or else, I would not be better but will stay in this level.I'm thinking about that...
>> I am contemplating about that.I couldn't follow myself in my mind,,is thiss expression right? Kkk
>> I couldn’t seem to follow what my mind wants.Have a great weekend. :)
>> Correct.
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