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2012-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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Yesterday, I heard a speak of a cartoonist. He drawing cartoons about Korean society. He said, in Korea, leftwing people and rightwing people both insist that the problem of equality will sove by individual effort. But he said it's wrong. He said that If we fix the wrong society frame, the problem will sove easily. The book, "Outlier"said that clearly. The book assert that the people who succededed are got chance from fortune completely. So we have to think fix the system, for example, the time when we estimate the talent of stuedent and so on. I agree that, but I think it's too difficult to reach. I feel I have to think about it a lot of time to find the way. Past Simple - irregular verbs Complete the sentences 1. Claudia went fishing and cathcing a fish. (catch) 2. Robert won a prize in a photography competition. (win) 3. I knew the answer but the teacher didn't ask me. (know) 4. Mr. [Name] taught me to play the piano. (teach) 5. My brother shot me by accident. (shoot

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Hello Jewel,  It was nice for [이름] to create a composition like this. I do appreciate [이름]r time for writing something about  what [이름] have heard. I do believe that this is a good practice for [이름] to enhance [이름]r knowledge. T.Jeny Yesterday, I heard a speak of a cartoonist. He drawing cartoons about Korean society. >> Yesterday, a cartoonist said that he will make a cartoon about Korean society. He said, in Korea, leftwing people and rightwing people both insist that the problem of equality will sove by individual effort. >>The problem of equality between the left wing and the right wing people will be solved. But he said it\'s wrong. >>But he thinks otherwise. He said that If we fix the wrong society frame, the problem will sove easily. >>If we fix the wrong society frame, the problem will be solved easily. The book, \"Outlier\"said that clearly. The book assert that the people who succededed are got chance from fortune completely. >>The book,\"Outliers\" said clearly that the people should assert themselves in order to succeed and have a better future. So we have to think fix the system, for example, the time when we estimate the talent of stuedent and so on.  >>So we need to think of ways on how to fix the problem, like knowing the capabilities of the students. I agree that, but I think it\'s too difficult to reach. >> I do agree that this will be a very difficult thing to achieve. I feel I have to think about it a lot of time to find the way. >>But I feel we need time to think and find the best solution.Past Simple - irregular verbs Complete the sentences 1. Claudia went fishing and cathcing a fish. (catch) >> Claudia went fishing and caught a fish. 2. Robert won a prize in a photography competition. (win) >>correct 3. I knew the answer but the teacher didn\'t ask me. (know) >>correct 4. Mr. [Name] taught me to play the piano. (teach) >>correct 5. My brother shot me by accident. (shoot >>correct

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