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COMPRESS
(n.) A soft cloth pad applied with pressure to heal an injury; (v.) To press together; To reduce in size or volume
Thank [이름] for [이름]r delicate correction. I think I didn't send the content of movie well because of my mistake.
They became friends and heard about fast of jungle from Leo's father, who emperior of jungle.
>"fast"--> "past"
Because It's near the estimate of UN, and he want to took good grade and approval of his "business" .
>I use the word "estimate" as "evaluate"?(not the physical area), this usage is improper?
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Hello Jewel,
It was nice for [이름] to explain [이름]r point but unfortunately I can\'t understand [이름]r last sentence. So I guess we need to talk about this in our class tomorrow. Thanks!!
T. Jeny
COMPRESS
(n.) A soft cloth pad applied with pressure to heal an injury; (v.) To press together; To reduce in size or volume
>>correctThank [이름] for [이름]r delicate correction.
>>Thank [이름] for [이름]r corrections.
I think I didn\'t send the content of movie well because of my mistake.
>>I think I didn\'t explain the story clearly of the movie beacuse of my mistakes.They became friends and heard about fast of jungle from Leo\'s father, who emperior of jungle. >\"fast\"--> \"past\"
>>They became friends and heard about the history of jungle from Leo\'s father, who is the emperor of jungle. Because It\'s near the estimate of UN, and he want to took good grade and approval of his \"business\" .>>Because it is near UN, he wanted to have good grades and approval for his business.
>I use the word \"estimate\" as \"evaluate\"?(not the physical area), this usage is improper?>>I use the word \"estimate\" as \"evaluate\"?(not the physical area) is this correct?
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