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2012-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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1. He cried at the top of his voice and he rushed at the thief. 2. We had worked for several hours after We came out of the office. 3. The troops gave a blow to the enemy. It was stunning. 4. His handwriting was illegible but I couldn't figure out what he had written. 5. We make some friendships in childhood and They last for ever.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! ^^, How are you doing today? I hope you are safe and warm. I finished checking your homework and I want to thank you for exerting effort in doing it. If you have the time, please read and analyze the corrections I\'ve made. Just keep up the hard work and someday you\'ll be rewarded. You take care always! T. Jeny :) 1. He cried at the top of his voice and he rushed at the thief. >>Crying at the top of his voice, he rushed at the thief.2. We had worked for several hours after We came out of the office. >>Having worked for several hours, we came out of the office.3. The troops gave a blow to the enemy. It was stunning. >>The troops gave a stunning blow to the enemy.4. His handwriting was illegible but I couldn\'t figure out what he had written. >>His handwriting being illegible, I couldn\'t figure out what he had written.5. We make some friendships in childhood and They last for ever. >>Friendships made in childhood last for ever.  

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