Jeny~I want to tell [이름] about my part time job.

Hello, Jeny! I'll tell [이름] about my part time job. It's my firt experience, I started this job last Wednesday. I'm a waitress in the small restaurant. I do not just serving the food, do a lot af other chores. I do Wraping hot delivery food, arrange dishes, calculating and so on. I pointed out a lot about lack of composure. But learnig the working and doing that so fun. When I do a job I must keep my head straight, that's why I feel that I'm alive vividly. And the meal in at the workplace so delicious. Maams very good at the eggplant dish, and other dishes too. In Saturday, the' mushroom creem rice' came out by mistake, and our waitress ate it. It was very tasty. The worker who together with me so nice. Boss taught me in a calm and orderly way. The maams in the kitchen send me badinages. I practice the acting after thinking about something. And the way love people. I love this job, but I'm very sorry about that I have to quit this when vacation is over.

Hello Jewel,

It was nice for [이름] to tell something about [이름]r part time job. I know that [이름]\'re enjoying [이름]r present job right now but sad to say that [이름] have to quit after vacation. It was nice for [이름] to create a composition. This is a practice for [이름] to improve [이름]r skills.

Hello, Jeny!

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I\'ll tell [이름] about my part time job.

>>correct

It\'s my firt experience, I started this job last Wednesday.
>>It\'s my first experience to have this job, I started last Wednesday.
I\'m a waitress in the small restaurant.

>>correct
I do not just serving the food, do a lot af other chores.

>>I don\'t serve the food but I do have a lot of chores.

I do Wraping hot delivery food, arrange dishes, calculating and so on.
>>I wrapped hot delivery foods, arranged the dishes, do calculation and others.
I pointed out a lot about lack of composure.

>>In some point I do lose my composure.

But learnig the working and doing that so fun.

>>But learning to do my job is fun.

When I do a job I must keep my head straight, that\'s why I feel that I\'m alive vividly.
>>When I do a job, I must keep my head straight, that\'s why I feel that I\'m vividly alive.
And the meal in at the workplace so delicious.

>>And we do offer delicious meal.

Maams very good at the eggplant dish, and other dishes too.

>>Ma\'am is very good in cooking the eggplant dish, and with other dishes too.

In Saturday, the\' mushroom creem rice\' came out by mistake, and our waitress ate it.

>>Last Saturday, the\' mushroom creme rice\' came out by mistake and so our waitress ate it.

 It was very tasty.

>>Correct
The worker who together with me so nice.

>>The worker whom, I\'m with is very nice.

Boss taught me in a calm and orderly way.

>>correct or

>> My boss taught me in a calm and orderly manner.

 The maams in the kitchen send me badinages.

>>The ma\'am s in the kitchen send me badinages.

 I practice the acting after thinking about something.

>>I practice acting after thinking about something.

And the way love people.
>>And the way to love people.
I love this job, but I\'m very sorry about that I have to quit this when vacation is over.

>> I love this job, but I\'m very sorry that I have to quit this when vacation is over vacation.