Jeong Seong Hun go to KIA Tigers
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Hi, [이름]!
Is he a good player?
I hope he plays well with KIA Tigers. ^^
Thanks for informing me about this.
See you on Tuesday!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Today,Jeong Seong Hun went to KIA Tigers.
>> correct
>> or: Jeong Seong Hun joined KIA Tigers today.
Jeong Seong Hun was outed to LG Twins last year.And Jeong Seong Hun wants to run in the ground more.
>> Jeong Seong Hun was forced to leave LG Twins last year, but he still wants to play longer in the field.
>> or: Jeong Seong Hun left LG Twins last year and he wants to play more in the field.
He is 38years old.And he went to KIA Tigers.
>> He is 38 years old and he went to KIA Tigers.
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